It was a sunny Sunday morning so I went to the park to go for a little walk in the park so I began to walk. In the park I saw a man walking his dog.
A few steps away there was a playground. On the playground there was a mum pushing her baby on the swing. Then I saw some boys playing rugby. My brother was playing with his dog Jimmy. Jimmy was fast as Flash Gordon until his leg injury. Then I got to the end of my walk. See you next time, byebye.
8 comments:
Great describing!
JB rm22
Great story Jordan I like that you are getting into publishing your little story's Keep it comming... Dad
Great writing... Very descriptive and an enjoyment to read. HK
Great writing... Very descriptive and an enjoyment to read. HK
Hi AJK,
Fascinating story. Looking forward for your next story.
Love, Mum.
nice DK
awesome recount e.w
good job
SM
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