Thursday, March 1, 2012

Candy Land R.L

This COLURFUL place made out of candy is full of rainbow colurs


like:red,green,blue,pink,orange,yellow,purple & violet. It's a splendid place full of candy where


there are NO spiders , NO snakes & NO scorpions. You can eat anything your heart desires even the toilet [which you probably won't eat]


There is even a lolly castle surrounded by floating JELLY beans.




Its a FANTASTIC place to be ! ! !

beautiful spring morning

On a beautiful spring morning, I crossed a freezing cold shallow lake to get to the soft sandy beach. I hiked along the beach as creative shells wash up on the shore. While the tides went in and out around my feet. A boogie boarder rode the laughing and lonely waves

The Haunted House

One night at 12.oo o'clock a little boy sneaked out of his parents house and walked down his street. Then he saw the very old, scary ,spooky house that lived two house's down from his parents house. He took one step up the wooden stairs and took a peek through the door. The next day he went back to his parents house and back to the hanted house.T hen all of a sudden a vampire popped out from the front door and took one bite and killed the boy. Oh DEAR!!!!!!

first day of school

I was walking through the bumbly grey path. The gentle wind pushes the brown yellow onto the lime green grass. It's fantastic go to Botany DowSchool! I walked through the bumble yellow class rooms. I walked to paper white door. I saw the outstanding glowing class room. Room 22. It had raspberry carpet, and fancy red and black tables. The best of all there is a bright yellow clock bay. The fully decoraded class room is as fascinating as blocks of gold. The first day of school went as quick as a blink of an eye.


The Walk in the Forest

It is an Autumn day. The long skinny trees are slowly moving side to side. The yellow and pink leaves are getting old and dropping down into the blue deep dark river. The big mud puddles are getting bigger and bigger.


That bushy bush is and darker and darker. Insects are flying around. It is so silent all I hear in my ears are birds singing with their soft voices. As I come out of that bushy bush I feel so happy to be in such a peaceful place.

Stroll in the Park ajk

It was a sunny Sunday morning so I went to the park to go for a little walk in the park so I began to walk. In the park I saw a man walking his dog.
A few steps away there was a playground. On the playground there was a mum pushing her baby on the swing. Then I saw some boys playing rugby. My brother was playing with his dog Jimmy. Jimmy was fast as Flash Gordon until his leg injury. Then I got to the end of my walk. See you next time, byebye.

Eating noodles

I had my fork ready to twirl the noodles on the fork that I was holding. The fork was glinting like pure shimmering shiny silver . I put my fork into the brown wooden bowl. As I sucked the noodles into my mouth, soup sprayed my silky white dress like a sprinkler. It was flaming hot, so I let go of my fork and ran to my room .After a minute I came back into the living and started eating again . This time I made sure there was some space between the table and myself. When I had sucked it again, the hot lovely smell covered my mouth , warming my whole body. Then I tasted the soup. The soup was lovely ! It also warmed my body too! Soon enough the bowl was empty and I was full. Then I said '' That was the best !''





BY E.W.