Monday, February 27, 2012

ice cream soda

As I slurp the ice cream soda, big bubbles form around my mouth covering my lips like a beard or moustache! I lick the bubbles off my enormous mouth, I can feel coldness of the vanilla ice cream. My hands were freezing like ice cubes that had just come out of the freezer. I could feel the small clumps of ice cream slithering down my throat like a slimy snake. I could feel the freezing flavour of Coke until it was all gone!

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Awsome similes!

Anonymous said...

Great discriptive writing N.E. Makes me want ice-cream.

SM said...

great similes SM rm22

Anonymous said...

great similes AM