Year 5/6 Class at Botany Downs School, Howick Auckland. Our school motto is "Our Best Always."
Monday, February 27, 2012
ice cream soda
As I slurp the ice cream soda, big bubbles form around my mouth covering my lips like a beard or moustache! I lick the bubbles off my enormous mouth, I can feel coldness of the vanilla ice cream. My hands were freezing like ice cubes that had just come out of the freezer. I could feel the small clumps of ice cream slithering down my throat like a slimy snake. I could feel the freezing flavour of Coke until it was all gone!
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4 comments:
Awsome similes!
Great discriptive writing N.E. Makes me want ice-cream.
great similes SM rm22
great similes AM
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